Rrine's Drawings

[Tejava]

Hello! I'm Rrine, and I have been drawing, (as a hobby), for quite some time now. I'd love your help critiquing my drawings so I can improve!

Drawing A
Drawing B
Drawing C

... and my Deviantart. Thank you in advace!

 

[lea florens]

xXLittleLostAliceXx is very neat and pretty. smile Though her torso/chest should be a little higher. Remember there's 'webbing' between the fingers - don't draw such a sharp and deep gap between the thumb and first finger. It should be curved and shallower. A straight line for the left arm makes the hand stiff, try to break it up by cocking up the forearm/wrist.
Hope that helps.  

[Tejava]

Thank you very much! I'll be sure to keep that in mind.

 

[chadolbaegi]

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Hey there : ) I like your art.

In xXLittleLostAliceXx, things I think you should improve on...

• the pose is a tad bit off-balance, and it makes her seem like she'll fall over any time soon ^ ^;
  
• her hands are too small
  
• the bosoms look elliptical as opposed to a more rounder shape (which would make it look nicer? IMO).

To fix the pose, maybe just put her left foot a little closer to the ground, and have her right leg come to the left a bit more. (My left, and my right.)

As for the hands, I'd say that the one on the right looks more noticeably smaller than the left, so just enlarging it a bit would fix it up?

And lastly, just make the bosoms a little rounder and, IMO, it'll look nicer. wink

I like the hairstyle, though, and the star on her chest. The little wings are nice too > u <
In Lesser Coucal, things I think you should improve on are...

• the head's alignment with the body

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If you moved the head to the right a bit, it'd look better : )

In Spatula's Commission, things I think you should improve on are...

• her hand (the one that holds the fan)

If it was more complete, it'd fix it up C: I like that one best, the pose looks reasonable, the colors are nice, and her expression is cool * v *

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[Sunsway]

Lesser Caucal:

You have a lovely style with drawing faces! I don't have much to say here, but one thing I'd like to point out is that the line to define the throat isn't positioned correctly. That line would be made by a tendon (at least I think it's a tendon <_<) that runs from right behind the bend of the jaw to behind the ear, down to where the collarbones are joined. The throat is between that. Reference: [x]


Spatula:

Left forearm is too long. Good pose though.


LittleLostAlice:

This might be a stylistic thing, but I think that the knee looks a bit awkward. The thigh should taper slightly closer to the knee, and it doesn't run right into the shin -- there's a joint there. Reference: [x] The reference doesn't mesh with your style and isn't completely realistic itself, but it's a representation that can be simplified. =)