Some Advice (Pleasey Please!?)

[XxDreams_DesirexX]

Hey there I wanted to ask for you opinion and advice
Well for the first day of school for my multimedia class, I have to submit a assignment that tells a story
I well I did the song with Obsession by SHINee, and with Loveless as the anime.
Well the video is interpretating a story, cause listening to the lyrics I think the guy has an obsession with the girl, and winds up killing her and himself afterwards (my opinion if I'm wrong I'm sorry : x )
And alot of people said this anime is like Obsessive, because Soubi would do anything for Ritsuka. So I thought it would carve a good story
Anyways it's only a minute I'm not quite done with is, I wanted to know if you can watch it and give me opinions on what I sould do next cause I'm in artist block
It is also a rough copy, so some of the clips arent in sync with the video or they lag (I fix that last)
I also wanted to ask if people knew the song or if you know Korean, to see if I got the lyrics as accurate as possible (I put korean on top, english on bottom)
Anyways can you do that for me? Please and thankies! : D
욕 慾 Obsession Loveless

 

[User_2629207]

"Seriousness is the refuge of the shallow."

Moving this to the Rant&Rave, that's where personal topics/help threads go smile Also, great choice of music.

- Oscar Wilde.

 

[Art Greylace]

I believe you've moved the clip. Or so it says when you follow the link provided.