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"One More Day"
Wake up
Just another day
Or so it seemed
Tried to forget
The fighting that happened
The night before
Wishing it wasn't there any more
Get dressed
Mom's been up
Sister's already done
Dad still sleeping
Done getting ready
Need a ride to school
Sister crying
Her car is taken away from her
Try to call a friend
She's sick
Mom's stubborn
Dad just getting up
Mom says ride the bus
There is no room
We don't want to
Try to call another friend
Sister still crying
Fighting with my mom
I try not to snap
Dad starts taking a shower
Try to get answers
Mom is silent
Sister still crying
I wonder why
Still no answer
We pry more
Mom leaves the room
I follow and try to find out why
Dad is staying out of it
Sister soon comes
Mom started her car
Sister's begging to have it back
Try to tell mom
None of this makes sense
It's all unfair
Try not to lash out
Sister is screaming
Mom is watching
Doeasn't seem to care
They start fighting mroe
Shaving and pushing
Sister won't let her outside
Trying to keep her car
Dad still not getting invovled
I can't take it
I'm breaking down
I sit in the hall and cry
It's moved outside
I can still hear them
Trying to calm down
No one is talking to me
They come back
I cn't take it
Screaming at each other
I get my bag and sit on the porch
Sister is crying
Still they are fighting
Trying to ignore
Is my dad oblivious any more?
Mom comes outside
Leaves for work
Sister is screaming
Keeps saying she hates mom
I go back inside
I want to draw
I want to write
I want things to be alright
Ride gets here
I walk out before
They reach the door
"Heather'll be out soon..."
In the van
I lose it
Phil wants to know if I'm okay
"I don't know
I can't take my mom"
'It' shuts the door
Sister comes out
We pull out of the drive
Sister says she hates mom
Says dad is tired of fighting
May let mom win
Still don't know what to do
Van is mostly silent
Bad thoughts and ideas
Fly by as I sit
Sister is smoking
Boyfriend seems worried
'It' is driving
I'm losing it
Get to school
It's rather early
We sit in van
No one's talking
Sister needs to be okay
Problems need to be fixed
Dad is tied of fighting
Mom needs to change
I try to not lose it
I need to make it
Let me life through one more day
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That poem was written the day of big fight between mainly my mom and my sister. The fight was before school. Phil and "Boyfriend" are the same people and only one of two names in the poem. Sister and "Heather" are the same people as well. 'It' is some one who I do not like and have had a bad experience with. If you have any other questions, PM me.
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"Vampiress"
Dressed in black and bathe din blood
She was a perfect example
Darkly beautiful, yet violent and wild
Filled with hate, yet to able to love
Touched by death she was
And still she was a live
Alluring and charming at first glance
Until wiched intentions were revealed
Cold and alone made her like that
Her curse she bore with pride
But a heavy pain remained
Damned to walk in the lonly abyss
Searching for reason
On the dark road of immortality
She mixed passion with anger
Lust combined with hate
And showed the world no mercy
Smighting those standing in her way
To feast on the blood othousands
With no respect for anime life
But only for the hunger and taste of blood
Until for once a human caught her eye
Determined to turn him
And wiling to love
After she showed her kindness
And then the world saw
The ramance mixed with bloodlust
The vampiric loves draining the world
Their tainted world finally perfected
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This poem is just about a vampiress who is very powerful and yet searches in secret for something to fill a hole inside her. Her eye is caught by a human, and she vows to turn him no matter what. In the end, they reach a sort of dark happiness together.
This is all I have for now. I will post more when I find the poems some where in my room.
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