Critique These please?

[Mushroomdance]

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I just started using Paint tool sai a few weeks ago for the first time. i think my weak points are.. er everything sweatdrop but especily the upper torso and using a light source create shading and depth too . any imput would be greatly appreciated Be as Blunt as you need to i wont take offence :}  

[lea florens]

Sparklies makes everything shinier. XD
Hello there!
Anatomy is what strikes me, when I look at the pictures. Regarding the second picture:
The coloring of the skin is the best part of the picture. smile Although there are some things you might want to consider...
The left thumb should be alittle higher
Upper arm should be at least as long as the lower arm, if not longer
Same for the thighs:lower legs

If there are more shading used in the clothing (like the skin, shadow, highlights, etc), I think it would be great. smile

Hope that helps.  

[Mushroomdance]

thankyou ^^  

[IAMONAN]

Like Florens said, the anatomy is the first thing you notice. Stick figures are usually a great place to start from when your drawing a body. Practice drawing certain parts of the body. Do some quick sketches of the body using pictures for reference. It helps, not much, but it helps.