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 Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 7:55 pm
well i decided to make a thread bout poetry.....yes poetry.
now to start off who here writes it and plz tell the good people of this guild some of your poetry
Ill start off mine are a little bit more romance based
How hard must i try
How hard must i try
to earn your love
is it that
you wish to test me
or do you
leave me with only unrequited love
how hard must i try
to earn your heart
why has cupid
been so cruel to only shoot me
how do I earn
such love
how hard must i try
that was one of my newer but it kinda sucks
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:00 pm
I got this published in a province-wide (yes, I live in Canada) high school newspaper. I don't really like it but it's cute ^_^.
I need the embrace
of garnets woven
into honey,
through the letters
of your name.
It was scrawled into the sands
that count the days gone by.
The ocean
bubbled
and washed it away.
It was traced into the skies
that asked for us to meet.
the wind
awoke
and blew it away.
It was etched
into the forever
that is my being,
and there
it shall remain.
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:03 pm
wow that was awesome i am like 1/100 of the skill of that
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:10 pm
sea breeze in a morning day, feeling like some wear i had lost you.
i open my eye's and see you there in my lap, stroking you're hair, with my fingers. but my mind feels heavy when i looked into you're past scars that never heal, feeling the sadness i creid. my tears run down so i coverd u're eye's so u wouldnt see. you ask why i was crying, i said it was the ocean spray.
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 1:37 am
owah azn pro at poetry the nxt shakespear... umm i think we should make a event that occureds shakespear and ur poems and a grand prize and things..
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 1:59 am
_Ja meh owah azn pro at poetry the nxt shakespear... umm i think we should make a event that occureds shakespear and ur poems and a grand prize and things.. Dude, you entered my poetry contest, remember? Grand prize is 9k. Zodiac Kenshido special event: Love Poetry Contest.Anyway, here is something I wrote. First LoveWhen I first met you I didn't know what to do or say. I was afraid that I might make a fool of myself. I'd heard about love, but I didn't know it could be like this. I only hope that what you see me as is The real me, not some act. You are my first love, did you know that? Every day, every night, I'm thinking of you: Your smile, your laugh, your voice, and Even the way that you tease me, then Make it up to me somehow. It's weird how well we seem to know each other, even though We never really talked about ourselves. Wherever we go or whatever we do, My attention is always fixed on you. Don't you know that you are my everything? When you're with me, all I see is you. I'm so crazy for you that when I say "I love you" It doesn't begin to describe the way I feel. I just can't imagine ever being without you. If there comes a day - heaven forbid - When we have to part, then There's just one thing that I want you to know: No matter what happens, No matter how long, You will always be My one and only First love.
Wrote it two years ago.
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 5:40 am
I secretly write some poems on my free time. =3
Let me go get those sheets on what I wrote my poems.
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 12:59 pm
this one i did when i was in a bad mood so yea...
poem
i stand there putting on my braslets and necklesses around my neck and on my wrists, like chains they keep my body here, not letting me go, keeping my body in reality,
then i put on eye shadow on my eyes, this keeps my eyes open, that make me see reality, so i put my head down, leaving my eyes on the floor as to try not to see reality, for what i want is fantasy, to not be noticed, to not notice anything or anyone, then i leave my long bangs hanging on my face, to be hidden, to not be noticed, then my mp3 goes on my belt, and headphones on my ears, this keeps me from hearing and beliving lies that people tell you, to keep you in their grasp, this makes me hear the truth, and that alone, then i look in the mirror, i think "i'm prepared now", but then i stare a bit longer and i ask myself, what the hell have i become?.
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 1:03 pm
sileeka_h _Ja meh owah azn pro at poetry the nxt shakespear... umm i think we should make a event that occureds shakespear and ur poems and a grand prize and things.. Dude, you entered my poetry contest, remember? Grand prize is 9k. Zodiac Kenshido special event: Love Poetry Contest.Anyway, here is something I wrote. First LoveWhen I first met you I didn't know what to do or say. I was afraid that I might make a fool of myself. I'd heard about love, but I didn't know it could be like this. I only hope that what you see me as is The real me, not some act. You are my first love, did you know that? Every day, every night, I'm thinking of you: Your smile, your laugh, your voice, and Even the way that you tease me, then Make it up to me somehow. It's weird how well we seem to know each other, even though We never really talked about ourselves. Wherever we go or whatever we do, My attention is always fixed on you. Don't you know that you are my everything? When you're with me, all I see is you. I'm so crazy for you that when I say "I love you" It doesn't begin to describe the way I feel. I just can't imagine ever being without you. If there comes a day - heaven forbid - When we have to part, then There's just one thing that I want you to know: No matter what happens, No matter how long, You will always be My one and only First love.
Wrote it two years ago.thanks an awsome poem 3nodding i heart it
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 2:17 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 3:27 pm
@sileeka_h
that was really good.i luv it!
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 3:47 pm
surprised
Wow, everyone.
Those poems were awesome.
I so envy all of you.
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 4:56 pm
As I lay there staring at the white painted ceiling,
I wondered if I will finish High School
If I will ever get my driver's license
If I will ever get the car I wanted
If I will ever go to college
If I will ever get the job of my dreams
If I will ever find love
If I will get married
If I will ever have children of my own
If I will grow old and have grandchildren
But now as I lie there looking up upon the ceiling as the blood slowly seeps from my wrists,
I know now I will not know the answers to those questions.
I am slowly slipping away from the life I will never get the chance to know becaase what I had just done,
not knowing why I had slit them in the first place,
not knowing what the people that truley cared about me,
but I was too blind to see,
how it would affect them to see me gone.
As I lay numb
on the cold marble floor
slowly slipping away.
Sorry if it's kinda crappy I just thought it up. redface
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 5:01 pm
Angels' Bleed
Angels bleed by the tainted touch
of my caress,
Needing to contaminate to illiviate
this lonliness,
I now know the depths I reach
are limitless.
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 5:12 pm
.Mistic.Azn.Dreamer. As I lay there staring at the white painted ceiling,
I wondered if I will finish High School
If I will ever get my driver's license
If I will ever get the car I wanted
If I will ever go to college
If I will ever get the job of my dreams
If I will ever find love
If I will get married
If I will ever have children of my own
If I will grow old and have grandchildren
But now as I lie there looking up upon the ceiling as the blood slowly seeps from my wrists,
I know now I will not know the answers to those questions.
I am slowly slipping away from the life I will never get the chance to know becaase what I had just done,
not knowing why I had slit them in the first place,
not knowing what the people that truley cared about me,
but I was too blind to see,
how it would affect them to see me gone.
As I lay numb
on the cold marble floor
slowly slipping away.
Sorry if it's kinda crappy I just thought it up. redface i liked it i think its great
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