Fix my Art - gimme red lines >.<

[Hamora Hime]

 

[RzDz]

pretty, i think it's perfect the way it is  

[snowdrift_2]

 

[Hamora Hime]

snowdrift_2

snowdrift: thanks on the hands... but i dont quite get the head shape lol...

n i suppose the boobs arnt big enuf?  

[Hattiakourri]

What I gather from that is that the head shape is too shallow and long, particularly in the face. If you add volume to the hair, that will fix that. Additionally, I would make the eyes smaller and drop them down, and recontour the cheek and forehead so the face is proportionate. If you did that, it would look 75% better, promise. smile

No, the boobs don't need to be bigger. You just need to drop them a little, so they sit lower on the chest.

All in all, though, very pretty. I like the soft colors and shading in this picture. It's very simple, yet perfect for the piece! razz

Don't give up!  

[littlecherub512]

the eye is too high and the nose and mouth are too low
the eyes believe it or not are in the center of the face if that helps at all  

[snowdrift_2]

HuNNie _ aPPLe

snowdrift: thanks on the hands... but i dont quite get the head shape lol...

n i suppose the boobs arnt big enuf?

Hattiakourri

What I gather from that is that the head shape is too shallow and long, particularly in the face. If you add volume to the hair, that will fix that.

No, the boobs don't need to be bigger. You just need to drop them a little, so they sit lower on the chest.

I agree with Hattiakourri and she said basically what I would've posted, but alas -- she beat me to the punch it. XD; Punch has a bad connotation to it for some reason~

 

[univers-m]

http://i27.tinypic.com/2ur32q0.png

ehh
idk whats going on with them hands.. but yours def need to be bigger!