Opinions wanted! (C+ C)

[Sauru]

This is my chibi style. Is there anyway I can improve it? I know it's a chibi and it's supposed to be kind of funky, but I want to know what others think.
Another thing is my coloring style. Is it good? Can I make it better? What can I change? Is there a certain type of colored pencil I should use?
Please be really detailed!

Oh, and the hands got messed up when I was outlining...they were neat, but then I messed up. Tips on keeping lines straight would be great too.

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[Errol McGillivray]

It's cute and works very well for what it is. I do think you didn't use the page to it's full potential. Try mapping things out lighting before you start, so you can use the space better. Had you done that, you would have been able to make it bigger and still fit on the page. The dead space around it is distracting.