Blue Eyed Angel

[DeathOfBunnies]

This is a poem I wrote about someone I went to school with. I was rather obsessed with this person and spent every night lying awake hoping and praying that they would feel the same way I felt. Later on I may post more of this poem. I am planning on writing a novel by adding to this. Adding ALOT to it.

Im all alone, and no one's there
My heart cries out in dispair
For something that isn't there
Your voice floats softly on the air
I long to meet your liquid stare
That saphire blue that seems so rare
To comb my fingers through your hair
To touch your cheek your skin so fair
To hear your voice in wispered prayer
To kiss your lips if I dare
To caress your body with love and care
Or mend your heart should it tear.
But love I fear isn't fair
And the one I seek isn't there.

What do you think?  

[Jareths Girl_24TTW]

I like that a lot. I think your an awesome writer  

[thomulus]

when you put prayer, it made me have to say da-y-er, ca-y-re, so that it rhymed. Try another word  

[Emmerah]

I absolutely love it ^_^ *completely understands the feeling of being obsessed with someone* sweatdrop
If you do get around to the novel I'd love to read it.  

[DeathOfBunnies]

thomulus

when you put prayer, it made me have to say da-y-er, ca-y-re, so that it rhymed. Try another word

That is only if you use it as Prayer (prā'ər): One who prays.

But if you use it as Prayer (prer): an utterance to God in praise.

It works. Sorry bout the jacked up pronunciation characters. sweatdrop