My Loving Obsession

[evolvingwolf]

heart My Loving Obsession heart
You are beauty undefined
A flame burning in the night
You are loving and kind
Being with you feels so right
I adore your company
And how you make me feel
You've set my soul free
So that I've begun to heal
Thank you for your kindness
You are my soul mate, undenying
As the gods are my witness
There is no one I'd rather be loving
You have helped me to grow
Helped me become a better person
You are the greatest man I know,
My one blissful obsession.

Please comment!!!

 

[Nyrihaz]

Whoever should be at the receiving end of this poem should be very greatful that you love him so.

The poem is very simple, very forward, but is beautiful because it is. Your words tend to radiate love in a very nice way. I love the first two lines, the comparassion with a flame in the night is lovely to me.  

[evolvingwolf]

Awww thank you! ^_^  

[The Sweet Darkness]

It's beautiful!! i absolutly love it!! i can just feel the love radiateing off this poem