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[Dyzt]

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some of my fav things i've drawn
thought id start of with it to get some good feed back  

[Dyzt]

btw i've never tried any techniques
so i would rly like to hear some
3nodding  

[Dyzt]

BUMP PLZ REPLY  

[keiiii]

Personally, I find it difficult to critique heavily stylized pieces because I'm not sure what your goals are. Are there any existing artworks with a style that's similar to what you're trying to achieve?  

[Errol McGillivray]

Read the all of the forum rules before you make another post in this guild.

For the art, get a set of french curves. (They're cheap.) It's like a curved straight edge so your lines won't be all over the place. Geometric work like this should be precise and clean. Otherwise, it looks like you're just throwing it together, even though you took your time and worked carefully.  

[Dyzt]

keiiii

Personally, I find it difficult to critique heavily stylized pieces because I'm not sure what your goals are. Are there any existing artworks with a style that's similar to what you're trying to achieve?

WEll.. no i havnt found anything similar to compare it too (which i think is a plus a deranged way xd ) but i guess i should of staight up asked for advise on making the lines less random and cleaner and advice on shading.  

[Dyzt]

Errol McGillivray

Read the all of the forum rules before you make another post in this guild.

For the art, get a set of french curves. (They're cheap.) It's like a curved straight edge so your lines won't be all over the place. Geometric work like this should be precise and clean. Otherwise, it looks like you're just throwing it together, even though you took your time and worked carefully.

im sorry... i kinda skimmed them and didnt catch the park about no bumping. sweatdrop and about the advice ill look into it the next time i go on a trip to hobby lobby 3nodding