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could someone read these lyrics i wrote?

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_Built_to_Offend_666

PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 12:58 pm


A WORLD THAT CANNOT EXIST

I can't see inside of me
maybe thats a good thing
I just bleed internally
I suffer compulsively
Every day chips away from me
Soon I won't be able to breath
I can't feel mentally
its for the good of society
My life is flawed fundamentally
I can't see outside my world
I'm just sitting here all curled
The blood has clot in front of my eyes
Every day my disease makes me hurl
My dead carcass consumed by hords of flies
All the time I feel like I never had a life

It's breathing in me
seething in me
teething in me
sheathing in me
Holy hell its feasting in me
eating in me
beating in me
heating me
seating, mistreating, and fleeting in me

Ignore my life just built for my grave
Ignore my life just built for my grave
Ignore my life just built for my grave
Ignore my life, waiting for the graveyard!

Have you seen the things that I have seen?
Have you felt the things that I have felt?
Can you witness the obscenities of my routine?
Can you eat what I have tasted?
Can you kill what I have killed?
Can you fight the obstacles that always keep me down?
What am I now?
What have I become?
Am I still living?
Do I even know?
Do I even care?
All I can see is mortality
Another statistic fatality
Such a normality
In my reality
Everything's a lethality
I thought I'd bleed much more than this!

Ignore my life just built for my grave
Ignore my life just built for my grave
Ignore my life just built for my grave
Ignore my life, waiting for the graveyard!

It's shaming me
Taming me
Maiming me
Flaming me
Claiming me its own
Framing me <******** s**t its renaming me
Blaming me
Exclaiming insanity in me
Killing all the humanity in me

Ignore my life just built for my grave
Ignore my life just built for my grave
Ignore my life just built for my grave
Ignore my life, waiting for the graveyard!

You've entered a world that cannot exist
It defys all logic and reason
You've entered my world and it cannot exist
You will hunt yourself down for treason
You've entered a world that cannot exist
It defys all logic and reason
You've entered my world and it cannot exist
You will hunt yourself down for treason

I just break it, I just can't take it
I just break it, I just can't take it
I just break it, I just can't take it
I just break it, I just can't take it
I want her to break, I want it to ache
I want her to break, I want it to ache
I want her to break, I want it to ache
I want her to break, I want it to ache
I want her to break, I want it to ache
I want her to break, I want it to ache
I want her to break, I want it to ache
I want her to break, I want it to ache
I want her to break, I want it to ache
I want her to break, I want it to ache
I want her to break, I want it to ache
I want her to break, I want it to ache
 
PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2005 3:36 am
Very nice...9/10.  

-Lasciate Ogni Speranza-


_Built_to_Offend_666

PostPosted: Sun Dec 25, 2005 11:14 am
thanx for the feedback biggrin  
PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 8:57 pm
*clap clap clap* May you make it big and still manage to stay out of MTV. 3nodding  

cuddlefish_Breezy


_Built_to_Offend_666

PostPosted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 8:49 pm
breezy1354
*clap clap clap* May you make it big and still manage to stay out of MTV. 3nodding


thanx, but thats hard to do (make it big AND stay out of MTV). but if slipknot did it, my band should be able to (eventually, but then again the odds of making it big are like winning the lottery).  
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