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Does it suck?
No, it's good, but could use work.
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Yes, royally.
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Awesome!
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:39 am


Killing Me Slowly

Pale withered skin,
Punctuated by lines of red.
Killing her slowly.

Weighing herself,
Starving herself,
Killing her slowly.

Enveloped in sorrow,
Scarred and lonely,
Killing herself slowly.

I think on this as I go to bed,
My wish is to soothe my aching head.
And I'm still killing me slowly.


P.S. No, I'm not an emo-child, I just had to get stuff off my back with this poem.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 9:29 pm


its kewl. I like it.

Xtrez

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