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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 10:34 pm
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I started this drawing a while ago, with little idea of what direction it would go in. I ran out of steam and ditched it, but thats a horrible habbit, so I need your help in finishing it dX
It has wound up as lineart, but I'm probably gonna color it and remove the lines altogether. Idk why I spent so much time cleaning up the lines. What I want to know before I go any further, is if there's anything messed up about the anatomy or proportions. I've spent so long staring at it, mirroring it, rotating it, that I don't trust my eye anymore. XD
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I know the pose is awkward and uncomfortable looking, kinda what I was going for. I kept going back and forth between different positions for the front leg...
Problem areas: back leg / foot, hips, face, and not entirely sure about upper torso.
So. Anything look wonky? Any suggestions on the pose - how to make her look more uncomfortable/struggl-y?
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:10 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 1:29 pm
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Okay, anatomywise most of it is very good. I expecially love the face. It's a cool expression, and a good head shape. Her trunk looks a bit large and unshapely compared to the rest of the image. Either bring her back down, her ribs up or both because it's just slightly to big. Her right leg is the main problem. At that angle she would have to be not only extremely flexible, but probably have sustained some kind of fracture along the way, mainly in the ankle reigion. Possibly rotating so the instep is on the ground instead of the ball of the foot would be more effective. (I did try to redline it, but I couldn't get it right, sorry! D: ) You've got a very strong and good line of the ground simply by placing her arms and left leg effectively, however her right is throwing off the illusion. I suggest bringing it back into a crouching position, or, moving it on it's axis to something more in line with the rest of the limbs, that way it will be more believable. Aside from that, it's totally awesome. I would really like to see it coloured. Good work!
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:48 pm
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