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Emmerah

PostPosted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:59 am
came up with this one while i was camping with my Dad. I have absolutely no clue what inspired me because i was on the beach in broad daylight singing about fish. Any kind of feedback would be good, even if you completely and utterly flame it.

Wish upon a star
Brighter than the sunshines
For the way back home
Home again, home again
Wherever it is you roam

Wish upon a star
More magical than rainbows
Be glad you did
With all your heart
Be glad you did

Wish upon a star
More brilliant than the moonglows
On a starless night
It's the glow within you heart
That makes it right
 
PostPosted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 5:48 pm
Awwww! I really like how you kept up with the scheme of magic being in a wish.  

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Dapper Dabbler

PostPosted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 3:19 pm
Your poem makes me wish I wished more on stars.
 
PostPosted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 5:39 pm
thanks so much! ~ heart ~  

Emmerah

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