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http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101904501  

[PolityOfQueens]

Too sappy.  

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thats my style. i simply write what i feel  

[AoibhealDragonheart]

Aha, I aboslutely adored the lyrics Night. There was this melody in my head the whole time to go with it, dont know if its the one you have with it or not but meh(actually I sang along with it the whole time, never heard the song but still I did, it was funny).

Is it supposed to be kind of fast, slow or about medium speed? I saw it kind of fast-ish.

But again absolutely loved it.  

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Tempest29

Aha, I aboslutely adored the lyrics Night. There was this melody in my head the whole time to go with it, dont know if its the one you have with it or not but meh(actually I sang along with it the whole time, never heard the song but still I did, it was funny).

Is it supposed to be kind of fast, slow or about medium speed? I saw it kind of fast-ish.

But again absolutely loved it.

yeah, it fast. most my new stuff is more poppier. the keyboard version is gonna be on my new EP, which is gonna be released in january. i was shooting for the 1st of jan, but ive been busy and im working on an 8th song for the ep. my old one can be downloaded on myspace though.

and thank you  

[xXkarma_is_my_enemyXx]

your lyrics were great! the song was (i think) up-beat, but really sweet. you said you wrote what you feel. if thats true, your lucky to have someone you care so much about.  

[Arc En Licorne]

wow i really like that i think it has a lot of heart and meaning to it. i rated it 5/5 and i favorited it coz i love it!! u have alot of potentional and i hope that this song gets put on a cd some day coz it really amazing. plz rate my song in the arenas its called Stronger.  

[Arc En Licorne]

i listened to ur acustic version on ur profile and it rockz by the way!! any way it sounded like it did in my head!! its got the perfect tune!!! if i could rate it higher than 5 i would but i cant one coz i already rated it and it doesnt go any higher so u kno!  

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yeah...my new EP was suppose to be finished yesterday, but winter break was crazy and great and i didnt have the time. i resume recording tomorrow night  

[Mydnyte Dystopia]

Those are quite well-written. I like your rhyming patterns a lot; it's not your average rhyme scheme. The lyrics have a good feel, and I like the way you use one word at the end of each verse, like "December" or "Together".  

[Fenpex]

Try not to be offended, but writing a love song is the easy way out for making something popular.
Taylor Swift ONLY writes love songs... Because she has no talent what-so-ever and thinks she's a f*cking Barbie.

Sorry, I just really hate love songs lately.  

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SECSY

Try not to be offended, but writing a love song is the easy way out for making something popular.
Taylor Swift ONLY writes love songs... Because she has no talent what-so-ever and thinks she's a f*cking Barbie.

Sorry, I just really hate love songs lately.

sorry, i simply write what i feel. 6/8 on this upcoming EP are love songs. lol

im not in music to get popular, im in it cuz its the only thing i know how to do.(also, i'd have to be a scrawny white guy with emo hair to be popular. lol)  

[Fenpex]

On This Night

SECSY

Try not to be offended, but writing a love song is the easy way out for making something popular.
Taylor Swift ONLY writes love songs... Because she has no talent what-so-ever and thinks she's a f*cking Barbie.

Sorry, I just really hate love songs lately.

sorry, i simply write what i feel. 6/8 on this upcoming EP are love songs. lol

im not in music to get popular, im in it cuz its the only thing i know how to do.(also, i'd have to be a scrawny white guy with emo hair to be popular. lol)

I meant as in noticed as a musician when I said 'popular'.
Some of your lyrics in it are pretty well written, but I just really dislike love songs.  

[A B Up Start]

SECSY

On This Night

SECSY

Try not to be offended, but writing a love song is the easy way out for making something popular.
Taylor Swift ONLY writes love songs... Because she has no talent what-so-ever and thinks she's a f*cking Barbie.

Sorry, I just really hate love songs lately.

sorry, i simply write what i feel. 6/8 on this upcoming EP are love songs. lol

im not in music to get popular, im in it cuz its the only thing i know how to do.(also, i'd have to be a scrawny white guy with emo hair to be popular. lol)

I meant as in noticed as a musician when I said 'popular'.

thats what i meant too  

[xxkakenutsxx]

Beautiful!