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Elnifi Chronicles (a webcomic)

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Shaitan Elnifi

PostPosted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 8:32 pm
Heya!

Im a relatively new face in the webcomic world and I was hoping I could get some feed back on my comic. Im the writer and another person does the art. (her deviant art page is in the gallery link)

The story contains action, cat girls, and awesome art so I would like to think that most people will like it.


link is here (click line below banner)
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http://elnifichronicles.comicgenesis.com/

please check us out and if u like us, let others know as well!  
PostPosted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 1:11 pm
hey everyone, just another little request. My artist has entered two peices in a contest on Dev art and the way she wins is if she gets the most favorites in the given period of time.

therefore my request is that u simply go check them out and if u like them favorite them. the pieces are

Angel of Dreams:
http://hisoku-no-sora.deviantart.com/art/Angel-of-Dreams-144696517

and

Dream Team:
http://hisoku-no-sora.deviantart.com/art/Dream-Team-145966263

Thanks to all that do this. contest ends on the 22nd so check them out quick!  

Shaitan Elnifi


PotatoesAndRice
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:56 pm
It's really enjoyable to read (and I'm no cat ear fan : P)

I think some back ground could use a little more detail, and the begining dounds effects shouldn't be the actual action written out (in ex stumble) You could try using other words such wooble, or words that make creaking sound.

Really good job though smile  
PostPosted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 5:09 pm
check out friday's pic if u want back ground XD  

Shaitan Elnifi

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