Hello! I'm very new to the guild, and looking for someone to give me a few tips to get better. My style is, more or less, surrealism, and not all the great as of yet. I ask that you please critique a few of my choice deviations. I want you to be as HONEST as you can, don't sugar-coat anything, I'm a big-girl and can take criticism.


1st: A Girl Called Harmony
This one, I sort-of like. It has an interesting concept, but I think it is lacking something...I'm in the process of coloring this on photoshop.

2nd: The Masque of The Red Death
One of my recent personal favorites. The mask is the drawings biggest flaw, I think...

3rd: WARNING..This drawing contains nudity. If you are uncomfortable with that, then DO NOT LOOK.
The Sirens Call
Another I kind-of like, but still think could be better...

That is all I really want critiques on, but feel free to browse in my gallery and tell me whatever else you think of it. All your help is very much appreciated..