I will be honest, I'm probably not going to change these any. One was a finished commission and the other.... well theres just too much detail to change.
I just wanted an overall idea of any major problems I might have so I can work on fixing them. :3
(if you need to see more of my work you can visit
http://tavisharts.deviantart.com I realize looking through my work I need to work a bit more on color theory to make things pop out.
sweatdrop But you might be able to find a few other things I missed)