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 Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:59 pm
um... this is my first time showing my art on this guild but... PLEASE RATE THEM FROM 1-10!THERE WILL BE BLANK SPOTS BECUASE I CUT OFF SOME STUFF I DIDN'T WANT TO BE SEEN.  This is for my Twewy guild profile pic.these are all random   uh...you can ignore the left side of this pic. i kinda erased some of the area wrong  ..... this was very random and i have nothing to say....  i didn't want to always keep drawing girls, so i drew a tough looking guy So! what do you think? please be nice >.<
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Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:28 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 10:18 pm
id also say 8
u might wanna work on the porportions a bit lyk the arms r a bit skinny
but they all look really good ^^
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 1:51 pm
xXprettyXkittyXx id also say 8 u might wanna work on the porportions a bit lyk the arms r a bit skinny but they all look really good ^^ i'm not good with the arms or hands.... thank you though!
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 2:16 pm
i would totally give you a 9 even a 10 for effort in line drawings, manga style
if you can do all that then one day i'd like to see a nice shaded detailed pic from you
i can see u becoming a manga artist, this is how my friend started out and now his pics look all professional and he's only just turned 15 so keep up the good work
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Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 2:50 pm
...Sorry, but I dislike it. Its good for if your just starting,
but I'm not sure I would say its very good. even my pictures from two years
ago look differant.. You could work on some stuff, like shading, anatomy, realizum,
3D effect, flow, angled faces, and so on and so forth.
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:54 pm
OneWeekRainisu ...Sorry, but I dislike it. Its good for if your just starting,
but I'm not sure I would say its very good. even my pictures from two years
ago look differant.. You could work on some stuff, like shading, anatomy, realizum,
3D effect, flow, angled faces, and so on and so forth. thank you for the comments .... -_-"' and yes i'm an amature. but i did this myself without taking manga art classes and i can't shade! i have problems with shading and the hands.
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:57 pm
crying wow, i now know how people feel when i say thier art is bad.
(but in their cases they really are stare )
damn, i need hugs.
b"d
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 1:50 am
I have never taken a manga/anime art class in my life.
I started out in realistic art, and then after watching Yuu Yuu Hakusho(I was like
4 when I started watching) I desided to start manga/anime. The computer drawing
you see in my last post was the second drawing I ever did on the computer.(<--also
drawing was made almost a year ago) I don't know what grade your in, but if I did
I could judge on how far your progression rate will be. I started drawing anime in
the 7th grade.(acorn head stage) then in high school I started scanning my drawing's
into the computer. The drawing below is from the 9th grade.  
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 1:10 pm
Hmm... well, there's some anatomy issues... but, I'd say somewhere between 6 and 7.
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 5:36 pm
Well, I saw the drawings you posted but sorry dear, youre also bad, don't talk like you know everything, because I can't see anything great in your drawings.
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 5:54 pm
miss chocoluvr_13; youre going good, altho, there is a long path
your drawing needs to get a natural look, flow a bit you see, they are a bit too rough, the moviments are too hard.
how to fix: watch people and train. yes, it takes time, but you'll get really proud
watch will also help at anathomy
dont forget, youre doin great, go on, right?? ^^
now you, miss OneWeekRainisu, shame on you ¬¬
would you like if people were rough at you or turn you down like that?? come on, and if it happened, stop bein grugdful and repeatin with others
and i'll tell you what, youre also a amatur, and your drawinga needs a big improvement.
if you want so bad to tell people how bad they are and how good you are comparing, at least be in another level and do it to HELP, not HURT
wanna talk about shadin, show a good piece of so with lots of examples what youre talkn about, yours arent enough, same foranatomy, realizum,
3D effect, flow and angled faces.
so, miss, how does it feel people talking with you without any politeness?
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 7:34 pm
chocoluvr_13 crying wow, i now know how people feel when i say thier art is bad. (but in their cases they really are stare ) damn, i need hugs. b"d Awwww! -hugs- don't listen to them...
Your art is going great Choco~ 3nodding I bet you'll be a fine artist in the future.
Don't ever give up hope just because some random none good artist tells you your not because after you become better in the future they'll think other wise. wink so keep up the good work and practice, hun
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:02 am
chocoluvr_13 crying wow, i now know how people feel when i say thier art is bad. (but in their cases they really are stare ) damn, i need hugs. b"d *tackles you with a hug* How was that? Your art is pretty good, but you'll need to work on some anatomy. But other than that I think that it's somewhere between a 7 and a 8. A 7.99999999999999999999999999 and on going! X3
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 8:22 am
I'm sorry for this, but I give you a...four. Don't get me wrong, your art isn't bad, just a little...under trained and practiced? Your drawings show a lot of potential for growth & development, which is really really good.
Well, your anatomy is off quite a bit, but don't fret: most people start off and take a while to leave that stage. For your drawings, maybe you could look at photo's for reference, or even have someone pose for your drawing to get it right. It would help greatly as to finding how say the arm would curve and bend at a certain angle, or a foot would be positioned. For practice even, just snatch a few reference photos, and try drawing the poses.
Now, with your lines. They're a bit hard and straight. Ah, I remember when I did that all the time...Well what you might want to consider doing is lightly sketching your picture first. Don't draw long lines in one stroke, try bringing your pencil down several times to do it, without putting heavy pressure. Then, you could try taking a pen over the lines VERY carefully. Add an eraser to get rid of the old pencil lines, and voila~! You have a clean, soft edged drawing. With practice of course.
Now, this is more of a tip then critique. With shading, please don't say 'oh i can't do it, it's impossible' or something along those lines. Anyone can do shading dear. To learn how, tke scrap paper, start at one end, using light pressure with light strokes, and as you go along the paper, gradually increase the pressure to make it darker. Once you have that mastered, maybe try doing it with a circle, using a reference to check how shading falls upon it. Then, last but not least, try it on a drawing of yours, still holding a reference possibly to check it.
With the shading though, sometimes you may want to do it on a drawing without pen lines, but just a simple sketched drawing.
Well, overall, your art's pretty good for novice level, and with practice, you should be able to make it amazing. blaugh
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