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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 11:14 am
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Our darkest dreams are filled with hate, Shadows drawing so near, A fire burning up our fate, The darkness plays to fear.
Desires coursing through our veins, They’re yearning for the light, With twisted dreams of bloody wings, Visions of crashing flight.
Like little butterflies flying, Fluttering fragile wings, Crush them and then they are dying, Beautiful, broken things.
Darkness the music is bringing, Closing in to form night. A dark entity is singing, Bringing truth, but not light.
The moon is shrouded in shadow, The stars cannot break through. The beast within us crouching low, Through this land a wind blew.
Destroying the world day by day, This our desires bring. Hoping to keep the end at bay, The birds, though weak, still sing.
Yet still yearning for what one wants, Knowing the end is near, The darkness to us laughs and taunts, It knows us, knows our fear.
Fearing death by our own nature, We brought this upon us, Unwittingly sealed our future, Carnal things did we lust.
Had we foreseen this sordid end, Different we could be, Against this horrid plight to fend, But this we did not see.
Blinded so by material Longings so very strong At the time so ambrosial, Without sight for so long.
Our hate and wanting is our end, Still just thoughts for oneself No one has a hand they can lend, Too busy with themselves.
Even now at the end we still Stick to what brought us here, Reaching for self want to fulfill Last dreams before the fear.
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I wrote this as an entry into a spoken word category so I suppose I paid more attention to how it sounded than to exactly what I was actually saying. This is one of my more favoured pieces that I had written since I have a love for strict metre and rhyme. This was written in common metre with alternating lines of iambic tetrameter and iambic trimeter; and an a-b-a-b rhyme scheme. Any and all critique is welcome and greatly appreciated!
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Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 2:33 pm
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 5:55 am
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:32 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:09 am
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 1:01 am
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