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Like my poetry->?
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chocoval

PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 5:20 am


To make it more writing style
Chocoval was traveling around the Canyon with Monodramon when he saw something start flicking around. he approached it and took that piece of paper. He open it and it says:

Poetry I made during my free time biggrin
if you like it please rate in the Arena section 3nodding


Girls....
you're all beautiful....
That's a fact that nobody can change....
You're one of the masterpiece that was created....
You're not some toys that boys can played with...
you're priceless....
As a matter of fact, not even God can buy your beauty...


Tell me if you like it or not biggrin
Comment are appreciated
 
PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:06 am


It is pretty good.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 12:43 pm


it could do with a little more poetic imagery. i mean its just basically. girls, you rock. i just feel it needs to have more depth. play with irony or something. i just think it needs to have a more interesting message.
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