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Lord Redtail Rathan

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 9:00 am
A/N: This is a poem I wrote to tell my fiancee' that I loved her (Before she was my fiancee' you fool. razz )

Ashley

Piercing blue eyes, like the deep sea.
Hair, golden as the sun rises in the morning.
Lips like rubies, yet soft as silk.
All of these things drive me wild.
Yet there is one thing above all else,
One thing that makes me care for you so.
And that is your loving heart.
For that is what makes you truly beautiful.
It is not just the outside, but the inside as well.
And for that, I am truly blessed to have you.
And to have your love. And with that I say,
Hey beautiful. I love you.

-For Ashley


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 3:02 pm
Awww crying

I need to find someone who will do that for me. It's a sweet poem and well written, I bet she loved it.  

Semiremis

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