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[BNGroxz13]

can you please read this and tell me your opinion about this (its my own version of the twilight saga after bella left jacob) please dont say anything mean like its the worst thing ive ever read or dont ever write again this was terrible that would really hurt my feelings  

[BNGroxz13]

THIS IS ONLY THE BEGINNING TELL ME UR OPINION AND I WILL PUT THE REST

“Jacob!” I cried at the top of my lungs but it was too late he had jumped off the cliff. What can I possibly be able to do without him. He was more than just a friend to me but what I was to him was a mystery that I will never be able to solve. Well at least not anymore. I can still remember when I first met him. It was only about a month ago but when I saw him I just well fell in love. Why did he have to jump, why. Was it the rejection of his love Bella that caused him to end his life? She never cared for him and now he died because of her.
I went over to the cliff to see if I could possibly see him. I could see nothing, I could hear nothing. “Why Jacob, why!?” I said this but I know he couldn’t hear me.  

[Hot iloveedwardcullen]

okay u kind of confused mi whose tlking bella or sum1 else!!
b.c. u said was it her. see if its bella u shld say me
but other then tht i think it was pretty good  

[Xx_nightbabe_xX]

Its really good but i think that its too much of the book be creative. like the cliff thing use something else maybe like he sliced the knife over his throat before i could stop him. But other wise it was really good!!