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 Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 4:37 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 3:28 am
wow nice stuff
maybe its cause i'm an anatomist but only thing for me is your clavicle is kinda on the low side and this is most apparent in your forearms because you draw skinny girls but muscle masses are always lopsided(haha i guess that's the word for it) but the anterior side is always slightly higher then the interior side. i think you captured it in the top drawing but its slightly off on the bottom one
but i like your style and you really seem to capture the essence of these girls
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:01 pm
thank you very much for the critique
i was worried peopel would be like 'omg anime style pow pow shoom cut cut cut ur art is not art'
tho can i ask...whats a clavicle?
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:21 pm
They look like they can be fashion models. biggrin
I really, really like your style.
I think the hand in the second picture, however, looks..almost backwards. The palm seems to be showing, from how the thumb is drawn, but the rest of the hand doesn't really.
Maybe a way to fix that is to show where the pointer finger starts instead of the thumb? Or, if it's cupped, show less of the hand on the bottom (that's what makes it look like it's backwards because of how the thumb is) to cup it upward.
Otherwise, these are really amazing. I really enjoy the folds and other details. :>
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:48 pm
haha a clavicle is one of the bones that make up the shoulder. its the one that goes from the bottom of the neck (starting fromthe little v shape) to right where the shoulder starts
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