1) I hate the title, "Star of Morning". If anyone has any better ideas for a title that would be great!

2) I'm writing this whole thing as a script. I would love to share it with you guys but I've been yelled at in the past for putting things in the wrong subforum.

Part 1
Part 2

3) THE REAL ISSUE.
I'm at the part of my story in which Samael (The Morningstar, the Adversary, Lucifer, Prince of Lies...) starts shooting flames in order to create a shield to protect its friends from the apocalypse. I want it to be dramatic, but not so much so that it HAS to do a specific move whenever it uses it's flame.