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Stelle Cadenti
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:31 pm
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Okay, here's another piece I just did. Same style as Smiles so Wide.

Wooden hands wave goodbye
to the day
to the night
to whatever may come

Windows stand watching
the stars overhead
As the sun shines below
From what they can see

We may be stiff
a little
Joints twisting with metal snaps
We may be dead
a little
Hearts yearning with unnending pleas

Please
My wooden hands are waving
Please
My metal neck is craning
To see the stars overhead and the sun below
We look too far and cannot see
Anymore

My metal eyes are straining
Please
My wooden feet are running
Please
 
PostPosted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:50 pm
I love it.  

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Stelle Cadenti
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:55 pm
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And I love writing these. Why did I not like poetry before?

There's more coming.
 
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