i wrote this for iSpankieFarie (Perfect Crime)

[Christopher Hall JMR]

The Perfect Crime

Moonlight grazed the lake last night
As stars aligned for a beautiful sight
Her eyes of radiance sparked a flame
Whispers from the wind call her name

Sitting on a bench with a lovely view
There was nothing, I would rather do
Leaning her head against my shoulder
I kept her warm as the night got colder

The crime scene was perfectly placed
Go in for the kill, with no time to waste
I grinned as I gently kissed her forehead
"Baby, I love you so much" I softly said

She opened her glamorous eyes so wide
"I love you too," smiling as she replied
Kissing her lips I showed my affection
In that moment there was a connection

Happily we committed the perfect crime
But we were not getting caught this time
The crime scene left empty as we depart
Stole a priceless item, each other's heart  

[Stelle Cadenti]

Yay, some new poetry in here!

I really like the premise of this piece, the perfect crime of stealing someone's heart, very romantic. There was just something a bit off about it though, I think it's the meter of some of the lines. Some parts came off a bit stilted because of it.  

[evolvingwolf]

AWWWWWWWWW! This is so sweet! ^_^