Poll! :D |
pshh pshhh pshhhh! D:< |
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You mofoing racist :D |
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What a beautiful Haiku ; o; |
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Haikus are the easiest poems ever! D; |
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Call me a whore cause I'm polling |
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I can't help you |
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I can help you o 3o |
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:38 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:56 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:56 pm
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![User Image](https://i322.photobucket.com/albums/nn411/TillxGone/Posting Formats/Dividers/Untitled-1.jpg) ![User Image](https://i322.photobucket.com/albums/nn411/TillxGone/Posting Formats/Blues and reds/shootingstar.jpg)
Twinkle twinkle little star, How I wonder what you are! Up above the world so high, ![User Image](https://i322.photobucket.com/albums/nn411/TillxGone/Posting Formats/Blues and reds/Star8.gif)
![User Image](https://i322.photobucket.com/albums/nn411/TillxGone/Posting Formats/Blues and reds/rsrb00.gif) 4, 8, 4? That's what I read from the one you have right now. It's in syllables, right?
Hmm. The first two lines are about the snow on the branch, but the last line is how it falls. If snow is on a branch, it won't slowly fall down... it'll probably just lump off because the branch moves from some nearby disturbance.
You could describe how snow is falling from the sky! Or how the branch is covered in white. wink
![User Image](https://i322.photobucket.com/albums/nn411/TillxGone/Posting Formats/Blues and reds/cloudandstars.png) Like a diamond in the sky, Twinkle twinkle little star, How I wonder what you are!![User Image](https://i322.photobucket.com/albums/nn411/TillxGone/Posting Formats/Blues and reds/Star7.gif)
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:00 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:03 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:11 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:12 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:21 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:24 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:47 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 9:09 pm
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