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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:38 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:56 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:56 pm
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Twinkle twinkle little star, How I wonder what you are! Up above the world so high,
4, 8, 4? That's what I read from the one you have right now. It's in syllables, right?
Hmm. The first two lines are about the snow on the branch, but the last line is how it falls. If snow is on a branch, it won't slowly fall down... it'll probably just lump off because the branch moves from some nearby disturbance.
You could describe how snow is falling from the sky! Or how the branch is covered in white. wink
Like a diamond in the sky, Twinkle twinkle little star, How I wonder what you are!
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:00 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:03 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:04 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:11 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:12 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:21 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:24 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:47 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 9:09 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 9:18 pm
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