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i thoguth scence i havent posted yet i thoguth id psot some of my peoms

Standing on the edge of who I am
and what you need of me.
one more promise could be the end of everything.
one last dance the best thing thats ever happened to me.
in this world of fantasy
you're the only thing thats real to me.
you're in my heart, we're never far apart,
but that's not good enough for me.
I hear your voice and everything just falls apart.
all the pieces of my world lay at your feet
in this world of make believe
you're the only thing thats real to me.

where are you now when reality
threatens all we want to be ?
here in my heart, where you are suppose to be.
and we stand on the edge
of all we're meant to be
and see it's not enough.
pick up the pieces and make a brand new start
and the fantasy becomes our reality
in this world you can believe
you are all I ever need to be
you are all I ever need to be.

one more word just may sink me.
one less lie will save my heart.
between the words and the actions,
lies the truth I want

I hear your voice and everything just falls apart,
all the pieces of my world are at your feet.
pick up the pieces and
make a brand new start.
and the fantasy becomes our reality
in this world you can believe
you're all I ever need to be
you're all I ever need to be

I have a question....

How can you be very literary in your poem, but you can screw english up so horribly in your post.... Seriously? HOW? I MUST KNOW!

>.> <.<

Also, good poem...