Hiding in the Light ( a short poetic literary piece) (pg)

[trui2]

Hiding now, The faceless danger that stalkes us from the side.
The warning shot just wasen't loud enough to wake us.
Puppets and M.T.V. robots building a better today.
Madness spewing from our filthy liars breath, the new age is NOW.

Please be warned.
The darkness is now hiding in the light.

We have all become pawns, the broken game carries on.
Super solider madness, X-box heroes, and nicorette junkies.
Blindly striking out with hurtful words.
Against anything that would challenged our perfect dream world.

Is it time to wake up yet?
Has the real danger passed?
Is it hiding in the light right in front of us, or just off to the side?  

[Lhia Dunwaith]

That is morbid, I'm not going to lie. But it is very thought-provoking. You have a way with making phrases into ideas. smile  

[NarutoAvatarHp]

trui2

Hiding now, The faceless danger that stalkes us from the side.
The warning shot just wasen't loud enough to wake us.
Puppets and M.T.V. robots building a better today.
Madness spewing from our filthy liars breath, the new age is NOW.

Please be warned.
The darkness is now hiding in the light.

We have all become pawns, the broken game carries on.
Super solider madness, X-box heroes, and nicorette junkies.
Blindly striking out with hurtful words.
Against anything that would challenged our perfect dream world.

Is it time to wake up yet?
Has the real danger passed?
Is it hiding in the light right in front of us, or just off to the side?

Whoa, man! That was intense! I loved it!