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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:34 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:37 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:41 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:50 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:51 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 10:12 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 10:41 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 10:45 am
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Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 3:56 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 12:47 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 10:33 pm
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I come from a family of notoriously underweight people... your character may be intentionally frail (a lot of people are naturally thin and frail), but unless he is anorexic to the point where he needs to be hospitalized, he is too thin.
Also, the thinner a person is, the easier it is to see their muscles, even if they don't work out at all and aren't strong enough to lift a shoebox. The reason for this is because (usually) fat is the only thing between the skin and the muscles, and so when there's less fat, the bulgy parts of the muscles end up closer to the skin, making them more visable.
This is kind of an extreme example... (link)
This girl, obviously, has no fat on her entire body. Because of this, we're able to see pretty much everything under her skin. Note how you can see the muscles on the legs and the arms?
On the positive side, your line art is very smooth, and has a good flow to it. I like how you used color instead of straight black (which contrasts more with the white background), and that makes it have a very nice calm feeling, especially when combined with the pose and the character's expression. Good work.
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