invader zim rpg

[pheobe0087]

hey here is a way to start the story


once upon a time when zim came to Earth everything was fine until he went to school he shall this one school girl her name was sarah he loved sarah but then all of a sudden his back pack back jumped off of his back and he knew it could only be one person gir  

[twiightmoon]

Excuse me, but you need more of a story and plot. You should also make character outlines.  

[pheobe0087]

do you have any ideas then