proportion and stuff

[Tsyki]

Hello hello ^__^ Im new here
I need some help with some different pictures if you could please :}

first off before I finish this Id like to know if there is anything I need to change... also dont mind the color dots those are for me to refer to later also the picture came out kinda gritty here because I had to screen shot it


second: anything that could be fixed? also I need colors for him... Im looking for unique color combos if you have any ideas X3


also I suck at proportion so this guy needs help too X3



Btw: I heart redlines whee  

[Errol McGillivray]

*pets the batdog* I was say to make his fingers more substantial. Even though they are supposed to be bony, the bone would have a certain thickness, then over that is ligament and skin. I think these look really good though. I really like bat dog. I would keep one as a pet. xd

Actually, now that I look, his wrists (in the first one) looks smaller than the carpals there would allow. I would try and make all his a bit thicker (just a tiny bit) in places where they get extremely thin. At the same time, I like the anglar style. I would say do it just enough so his arms look like they can hold up the head and torso without breaking.

Great work though. (You could teach me how to paint. xD)  

[Tsyki]

Errol McGillivray

*pets the batdog* I was say to make his fingers more substantial. Even though they are supposed to be bony, the bone would have a certain thickness, then over that is ligament and skin. I think these look really good though. I really like bat dog. I would keep one as a pet. xd

Actually, now that I look, his wrists (in the first one) looks smaller than the carpals there would allow. I would try and make all his a bit thicker (just a tiny bit) in places where they get extremely thin. At the same time, I like the anglar style. I would say do it just enough so his arms look like they can hold up the head and torso without breaking.

Great work though. (You could teach me how to paint. xD)

X3 thank you I found this most helpful 3nodding haha I could do a painting tutorial if youd like whee  

[Errol McGillivray]

It would be great if you'd make one. Just link to it in the tutorial sticky and we'll put it up so everyone can see.

Please continue to use this thread to post your work. We look forward to seeing more.