Mogtoats' stuff [Updated: Jul 19 2010]

[Mogtoats]

Thanks for the redlines. smile
*sigh* that'll teach me to not framewire before drawing the lines.  

[Badeye]

I forgot to mention, I love your pencil drawings. 3nodding  

[Mogtoats]

Thanks. smile

I think I figured out what is wrong with Raven: shading on the cape. I don't think the anatomy is THAT off. So if I changed the shading it would look better. Mhm. Haha.  

[Mogtoats]

What I've been up to since last time: A bunch of stuff. And began playing around with CGing, not quite there yet.

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It's a lot of stuff. I'll take any comment you want to give.

Note: everything I post will be Gaia-related from now. I Jekyll-and-Hyde-ed myself. XD  

[Errol McGillivray]

Most recent.

This is clean and while the lines are chaotic, they describe form and have a unique texture and quality.

That table drags down the image though. While it may not seem important, everything in the image is. I would say that next time, keep even the mundane things 3 dimensional. The table would just be a very short, wide cylinder, so it would have been simple to do.

Anyway, since I've been seeing your work for as long as I have, I can say that it looks like your work is maturing into your unique, workable style that can express anything you want, rather than just "trying" to express things. You're communicating things much more clearly now. It's really good.  

[Mogtoats]

Thanks for comment Errol. :3

Yes, I got a little lazy with the table. No excuses this time. XD  

[Mogtoats]

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[Mogtoats]

OMG, major redline needed. Please!!!

WIP  

[CariRae]

So number 1 make the arms more in line so it doesn't look so awkward. Number 2 she doesn't have a waist it looks like she is as rectangular as a man. 3. The breasts look like they are defying gravity a little and then make the bra come together in the middle more or add proper shading to make the breasts look like they are going out. 5.The neck should come out of the middle of the bottom line of the jaw not beyond the chin. 6. She looks like she is marching in that position so if you want her to look elegant move the bent leg in a bit. Her hands and feet are a little big too. and the outer edge of feet is more of a straight line than a curved one.

Other than those anatomical things, the coloring and shading is amazing. It is very pretty and u added a lot of detail. The wispiness of it looks cool.  

[Mogtoats]

Holy crap. Hello neglect.

Been MIA, off the Nets and into the real world.

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Still have one or two unfinished drawing lying around somewhere. I'll finish those before beginning anything else. D: