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 Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 3:51 pm
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it is sorta "dark" at the beginning but it be comes "happier"
tell me what you think...
(its about a girl meeting an angel)
"Her eyes were weighed down by sadness and her cheeks were pale with pain. The soul inside of her was nearly gone and her heart was as cold as ice. Her body dared to take another step, but her mind feared the future. She fell, unable to lift up from the ground. Her white dress was faded, like her past. She tried to sort through her mixed thoughts. She found broken dreams of color, turning black.
No Return. No turning back
Suddenly, light leaked into every inch of her body and then, it surrounded her, trying to melt the ice from her heart. She lifted her weary head to the most beautiful sight, an angel. The angel's eyes were filled with the memories she so vaguely remembered, the memories she wished she could relive. She had beautiful silvery-blonde hair that looked of silk. Her skin was radiant and shone of the morning sun. Her lips, the perfect shade of red, her clothing caressed her body perfectly until every last fold. Her wings were all the way open and they were confident. The angel took the small girls hand and hope raided the girls body, getting rid of nightmares and bad memories. She lifted off the ground into the air, her body numb."
I like it. Im not done yet, though. whee
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:25 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 7:34 pm
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