Allvis` Sketches and shiz [New WIP`s]

[Allvis]

Allvis`Sketches and Shiz
Hello all and welcome to my sketchbook and shiz thread.
Just gonna do a swift introduction before we get down to buisness. The name is Allvis and I`m a 20 year old Viking (Ja maan, I`m Norwegian), working and doing art on my spare time. I would despribe my art as detailed realistic but with animeish hints to it. My biggest source of inspiration are DA`s elsevilla. Man, his art is awesome, I wanna be like him when I get older XP.
I usually draw on paper with mechanicals pens, scan the art and then colour them on openCanvas, but lately I`ve been practicing at drawing on my tablet.
Myeah, guess that`s it. Critics on my art are welcomed plz
My DA: http://allvis.deviantart.com/

Allvis` policy on critiques:
- Be honest, don`t hold anything back
- Be patient with me. I`m pretty thick and don`t allways understand what you mean  

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Goal and Mentor list:
Goals:
- Anatomy
- Proportions
- Backgrounds

Mentors:
None

 

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Current WIP(s) and recently finished art:

Current WIP(s):

This is a fan art of the oldest Endless in the Sandman books, Death.
I recently bought the first of the Sandman books some time ago as a gift to my girlfriend but chosed to read through it before sending it. After finishing it, I thought I should draw her, so I did.
So I`ve fixed alot of things I`ve gotten critics on, like her face, chin, right arm and her left eye, and I`ve finished the background. Any thoughts?


A tablet doodle that turned out to be my avatar. I was just doodling/praticing on my tablet when this came to life.
I`ve fixed acouple of things, like added more canvas and trying to fix her left arm but I still recive comments on the arm. Can anyone help?

Recently finished art:

This is a group shot thingie I made for the regulars of the Avatar Sketches Thread in the Picture Post forum. This took quites some time to finish Dx  

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Fin

 

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~Pops champaign~

 

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New WIP`s posted
I need help with the second wip x.x