//Toxi Needs Help

[T o x i c` Quiddity]

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^ Help? ^

The angles are off, but I can't figure out what is specifically wrong, so can someone politely [without telling me to give up drawing forever because I suckorz] give me some constructive criticism?

PLZ&THANKYOU

 

[Apriorism]

( .::[ - K |N| O [C] K- ]::. )

♪Gotta knock A litt.l|e| harder brea k through th[e] [D]oor ♪

If I catch you with my properton, such as my BUMP, info, graphics, and art; I'll report you. D<
-Will help-
But you posted it in a very popular
forum with a bunch of great artists.
I'm sure they can give you a much better advice. xP
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[Apriorism]

( .::[ - K |N| O [C] K- ]::. )

♪Gotta knock A litt.l|e| harder brea k through th[e] [D]oor ♪

If I catch you with my properton, such as my BUMP, info, graphics, and art; I'll report you. D<
-Helped. PM. Done- xP
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[T o x i c` Quiddity]

Pfft, you'd be surprised.
Most of them can't give advice well
rofl rofl

 

[tirbutt]

SHUTTUP D8> JUST CUZ IM STOOPID OK? ;o;

AND I TRIED YO sorta... >3>...

8D;;; /leaves the advice giving to others/

 

[T o x i c` Quiddity]

LAWLZ XD

Pudder tried, so she gets a gold star
8D

 

[Danaidae]

I don't really know what kind of angle you were going for but altering the guitar might help a bit.

i.e., If you were going for the "looking-down" view [since the character is in a similar position], you could do some foreshortening, decreasing the size of the upper body in comparison to the lower and showing more of the top. Then the circle would become more of an oval and the bridge would be thinner. You could also try making the upper neck where the right foot is on curve further. blah

I doodled an overlay on the off chance that it might help you figure out what it is that you want to fix. sweatdrop

It's got terrible lines because my mouse is a possessed monster. mad P:

one not nekkid / +clothes

Hope you figure it out! Btw, I love the way you drew the hands. gonk heart  

[Apriorism]

( .::[ - K |N| O [C] K- ]::. )

♪Gotta knock A litt.l|e| harder brea k through th[e] [D]oor ♪

If I catch you with my properton, such as my BUMP, info, graphics, and art; I'll report you. D<
Describing how it should be is hard tho.
Thats why a visual is better than words.
I can't describe things well for s**t. 8D;;
-Poofs out-
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[T o x i c` Quiddity]

Thank you , I also think most of the problem was the guitar too, but I see a lot of the mistakes I missed.
Thanks everyone! ^^ <33