While I'm certain I won't recieve much feedback, I thought I would give it a shot. Here's my latest pice of work, with all the BL, incest and barely-there shota'y goodness you can take. Honestly, that's hardly what the plotline is about...yes, there is a plot. It's a short story, and very much still in the works. But I'd love to hear any feedback. Thank you.

]http://www.fictionpress.com/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=2285296&chapter=1