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 Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:00 pm
Till The Morning Neither of them are my "style", but if I had to pick one.. I'd say number two. I don't want to sound like an a*****e here, but the first one -almost- sounds cheesy.
Don't worry about it, we all have our own styles, and the first one should be a bit cheesy because it's about my boyfriend and I before we started dating. lol.
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:31 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 7:20 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 7:32 pm
pixie1821 i like both. you really do have a talent for writing! me too. I like the 1st one better, though.
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 11:26 pm
I don't write but, I'd prefer listening to "Fallen from the Sky" lyrics rather than "Heaven's Shadow". ^^;;;
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Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 10:52 am
i like both of them. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 2:20 pm
.~.~.[[PyRo]].~.~. i like both of them. 3nodding Thanks guys
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Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 4:58 pm
I liked both but Heavens' shadow made a bigger impact
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 6:52 pm
cowz_rule018 I liked both but Heavens' shadow made a bigger impact I have to agree. As one lyricist to another, continue with what you're doing. You show pontetial. Keep up the great work!! xd
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:41 am
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 12:18 pm
thery are both great but i like #2 better
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 1:02 pm
i think theyr both pretty good.they arent great but they are good.the first one reminds me of angel flying to close to the ground by elvis presley.
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