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 Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 8:36 am
this is copyrighted...just so you all know
Safe to Love You
The doors close
All is darkness
I stand trembling here
Waiting for you
Your eyes blink slowly
But you don't know me
Bitterness holds you
Calling you her own
Then I close my eyes and
Only then it's safe to love you
So I'll close my eyes and
Only then it's safe to love you
Sit in the rain and soak up the sky
Like water bleeds through
You slowly seep into my core
I think of you
Aching, deep inside
You're my secret
Wrapped with all my
Sacred hopes, deepest fears
I keep you there
For fear they'll find you hidden here
Then I close my eyes and
Only then it's safe to love you
So I'll close my eyes and
Only then it's safe to love you
Sit in the rain and soak up the sky
Like water bleeds through
You slowly seep into my core
I think of you
Then I close my eyes and
Only then it's save to love you
And I close my eyes and
Only then it's safe to love you
So I'll close my eyes and
Only then it's safe to love you
And I close my eyes and
Only then it's safe
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Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 5:05 am
Comments? Feedback? Criticism? Please?
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Posted: Wed Apr 05, 2006 10:49 am
This is excellent as well. It reflects how I feel about a certain someone. Or felt, as I'm trying to get past it. I like the repetition at the end. It gives a sense of assurance in that safety.
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Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2006 9:19 pm
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:40 am
this reminds me of how i felt around a special someone who is obviosly no longer with me which is the reason io started writeing
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