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LadyNox
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 12:37 am
Title: Lunchtime Tension
Author: LadyNox (Dark Goddess, any where outside of Gaia)
Status: Finished
Warnings: None
Disclaimers: Yu-Gi-Oh ain't mine.
Summery: Kaiba has a favorite diner.
Note: All types of feed back is accepted. Except for flames, of course.


There's this diner I go to. It's not exactly a great place. It's sort dingy and small. The food's not all that great and the service is appalling. But I still go there everyday.

Today is no different.

Sitting down at the counter, I rest my elbows on the smudged counter top and place my chin atop my folded fingers, looking into fiery honey brown eyes.

"Well mutt, are you going to stand there all day and stare at me, or are you going to take my order?"

Some people may ask me why I go there. It's certainly not a place of my caliber. I would have to agree. It's down right beneath me actually. But if I cared enough to answer them, I would tell them that it's not about the look, or the cleanliness, or even the food.

"Kaiba," he growled with amazing restraint. He grabbed his note pad and moved towards me. Brown eyes promising death, the forced smile he gave me leaned more towards murderous than pleasant. "What would you like?"

It's about the company.

Owari.

This is something I wrote at the spare of the moment. The title comes partly from my nephew�s only feedback, which was �sexual tension� in written in caps. ^^;;;  
PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 12:54 pm
I like it so far. 3nodding  

AlexandraAnn


Syntria
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 2:53 pm
<3 Beautiful.

- AlexandraAnn, it's a drabble. One-shot I do believe.  
PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 3:27 pm
MistressPaco
<3 Beautiful.

- AlexandraAnn, it's a drabble. One-shot I do believe.


Oh sweatdrop  

AlexandraAnn


Adnamac

PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2006 12:07 pm
I think this was really cute. I'm not a big YuGiOh fan (though I used to be...sort of) but I definitally enjoyed this little bit of writing.

Good job, and thank you for posting it! More drabbles, or something longer, in the future, maybe? :3
 
PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2006 11:04 pm
Thank you for the kind words. I'll try and post more stuff. ^^  

LadyNox
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R.A.E.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 4:42 pm
It's interesting, though very short. Please think about continuing it.  
PostPosted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 11:18 am
R.A.E.
It's interesting, though very short. Please think about continuing it.


Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. But that's really it for that one. ^^;  

LadyNox
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NaruSasuiscool

PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 1:30 pm
awwwwww but it seems like it can go really far lolz biggrin  
PostPosted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 8:28 pm
Cute :3

I like your writing style, good choice of words. XD I agree with the others, it would be nice if you made it longer. 3nodding  

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 8:49 pm
I liked it, it was really interesting and certainly grasped my attention heart  
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