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PostPosted: Mon Feb 29, 2016 8:30 am
Daveigh (da-vay) Imani Heirborne
Overzealous Motor-mouth

If you know Daveigh and maybe even it you don't, you know she hardly ever stops talking. She has a lot to say on just about everything and is full of what most people consider useless information. She's a generous, helpful and fun loving person, but she talks so much most people just want her to shut up and go away. It's only when she's telling a story that it's most acceptable and can she ever weave one. Let's not forget to mention in speech class, public speaking, not a problem.

One white Lie ... and then another

Daveigh lies a lot sometimes for a reason, to accomplish a goal and sometimes really just because. It has become something of a habit, which makes it really hard to believe anything she says, but the girl is convincing. She can spin a tale and she knows it, so she'll often have you really second guessing if her story is real .... That's not to say she isn't caught in her lies, because you can only lie about a thing so many times before it come back to bite you and once you tell one lie, you'll probably have to tell another. Eventually the lies are going to catch up with you and you're probably going to be in a world of trouble. Like the possibility of failing the 12th grade because you lied about that research project and your dead aunt came to education week. Oops did she tell that lie ... dammit. Her aunt's still less than pleased and she's not the only one. Her parents are seriously debating counseling and Daveigh doesn't think she needs that. The more she gets caught the less she is trusted, even her friends are starting to have a hard time believing what she says. Maybe she should tell the truth more ... maybe.

I woke up like this ... Flawless

Is she ... no. Somehow though she always seems to take perfect selfies. Bed head, not a problem. No make up, she's good. Bad lighting, never! What is a bad selfie, she's not sure she knows. Maybe she just has a really good phone camera.

ANYTHING ELSE?

Daveigh is 17 years old and a senior in high school, with a quirky eclectic style she stands out though that not terribly hard for the motor mouth. She hates it when people pronounce her name incorrectly and its one of the easiest way to shut her up, if only momentarily.  
PostPosted: Mon Feb 29, 2016 11:17 pm
Hey, Kaori! I love Daveigh's concept - she seems super fun to play, and she'll be a great addition to the shop! I have a couple of notes on her profile, and then hopefully we can get you a stamp!

HIGH CONCEPT
This is a great high concept, and I get a really great understanding of Daveigh from your write-up! However, you do go on a little bit long - please review your paragraph and look for places where you might be repeating yourself, providing extraneous information, or else can make your statement more precise.

TROUBLE
You say Daveigh is convincing, but you also say she has been caught in her lies multiple times - have people started to question her stories more often recently, even when she's telling the truth? Please consider how Daveigh's lies affect her relationships, not just her academic life. smile

POWER
While this would be a great (if underpowered) Riser power, as a Dreamer power, it is inappropriate, as it is something internal to Daveigh's body, and not a way the world subconsciously bends to accommodate her. An appropriate dreamer power along similar lines would be that her selfies are always perfect.  

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 29, 2016 11:37 pm
Nice nice !! I got no notes.

APPROVED !!
 
PostPosted: Thu Mar 03, 2016 5:23 am
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