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[Detective V3]

I just finished my dream avi! It's based off of this song, Shooting Star (yes I sing in choir). And I always like to be vain and show completed dream avis off in the Avatar Arena.
But then I thought, I could change the lyrics and it could sound like an R:G avatar.
So I came up with this:
Description:
In the heavens, there is a river
And when the moon is not a sliver
A strange, different girl, so to say
Would flutter down to that Milky Way.

Past towns and villages she would fly ;
Past the forests and mountains of the sky
At last! She would reach the riverside
And down to the bank she would glide.

From the river came a foggy haze,
A swirl of purples and whites and grays,
And in that mist the girl would wait
For something she hoped would change her fate.

Then, on the horizon, a star appeared!
It came fast and quick and neared and neared!
The girl leaped up and started to sing
And through the night these words would ring:
(I need votes here. Choose which one is better)
Option 1:
"Star shining bright in the middle of the night,
Oh, star with a tail so light,
Star shining bright in the middle of the night,
Please make Gaia alright...
Grant me this wish tonight."
Option 2:
" Shooting star, now that you're in my view,
Shooting star, make Gaia anew."
And so I need some counsel and permission to use the RevolutionGaia tag...  

[Detective V3]

Oi I need feedback here  

[jellykans]

Complete Symphony

Oi I need feedback here

I really like the first option. We'd decided to pass on the avatars for now, but yours is really good. Give it 24 hours, and I am sure you will get feedback. The avis don't go up until the beginning of the week.  

[frozen_water]

I like the first option! I'm not sure about the tag, but you're more than welcome to advertise it here as far as I know.  

[Pwnder]

I heart U Symphony

I personally believe it is cute and creative. But beware of the Arenas right now, there are several participants who like to bash us R:G members who do submissions, and at times can be nasty about it. If your in it to win it, then do so probably without the tag. If you are willing to do it to make a statement then I'll cheer you on 100%, but I would do that any way whee  

[xx I met my fate xx]

Go for it, just set it to not allow comments unless you'd like to get bashed. The Rev:Gaia entries were being taken the mickey out of.  

[Detective V3]

xx I met my fate xx

Go for it, just set it to not allow comments unless you'd like to get bashed. The Rev:Gaia entries were being taken the mickey out of.

Micket? If anything I hate Mickey Mouse.
I think I'll not go under the tag, and that I'll just state my love for R:G.
I hope that won't make a Mickey come out of me.  

[Detective V3]

Pwnder

I heart U Symphony

I personally believe it is cute and creative. But beware of the Arenas right now, there are several participants who like to bash us R:G members who do submissions, and at times can be nasty about it. If your in it to win it, then do so probably without the tag. If you are willing to do it to make a statement then I'll cheer you on 100%, but I would do that any way whee

Hey! You were the one who helped me complete it! I'm gonna write that epithet right after I finish submitting my avi.
I'm not gonna go under the tag so that I don't get the Mickey Mouse beaten out of me.