Hey girls, I need your feedback/help! c:

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Lady Vendetta Iceflame

I screenshotted your avi so that if you do want to change it, you're free do so. c:  

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Lady Vendetta Iceflame

No problem. heart  

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Chemism

Not bad! I really like how you did the eyes. c:

I'm not the best artist, but I have some tips.

1: Since her face is head-on, her nose shouldn't look like it's sideways, a small little 'u' or something would work for a better nose, than the 'L' with head-on shots.
2. You should work on lighting and shadows. The only thing in this picture that seems to have it is the hair and eyes. The bow would look much better if it had darker parts to show it's folds and such. c: But it's pretty easy to learn once you get a hang of picking a source of light.

I plan on watching some tutorials on lighting and will be taking in all feedback to practice. Thank you for your honesty and feedback. c: I always feel when drawing noses that it's awkward. I kind of rushed on that sample but I'm going to redo it from scratch and see how it turns out with smaller eyes, and lightin and shadows taken into effect.  

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Lady Vendetta Iceflame

Thank you so much! heart emotion_kirakira