Everything I am

[Mtodamax]

I am strong
Yet I am weak.
I am the song
That cannot speak.

There is a rythm
All must follow.
There is a bosom
Above each hallow.

I can't sing the song of love,
Or any song at all.
But one must use a glove
to sap the one who calls.

I am the sorry pun,
farewell bright sun.

~This is my sorry attempt in creating a sonnet~  

[EarlsGarden]

At least you're writing one. I can't even get myself to write a sonnet. LOL.

 

[Mtodamax]

SmileUponMyStar

At least you're writing one. I can't even get myself to write a sonnet. LOL.

SOme sonnets are hard to make because you have to have ending rhymes and ake it sound logical, mine however does not sound logical. But good attempt right?  

[hoenest]

Angela_flames14

I can't sing the song of love,
Or any song at all.
But one must use a glove
to sap the one who calls.


~This is my sorry attempt in creating a sonnet~

for the line, i think it should be the ones who call, so it is in rhyme with "or any song at all"

good job trying though o:
i wish i could write my own sonnet, but i ain't got no time fo dat  

[Mtodamax]

tanqela

Angela_flames14

I can't sing the song of love,
Or any song at all.
But one must use a glove
to sap the one who calls.


~This is my sorry attempt in creating a sonnet~

for the line, i think it should be the ones who call, so it is in rhyme with "or any song at all"

good job trying though o:
i wish i could write my own sonnet, but i ain't got no time fo dat

Thanks for the tip smile  

[hoenest]

Angela_flames14

tanqela

Angela_flames14

I can't sing the song of love,
Or any song at all.
But one must use a glove
to sap the one who calls.


~This is my sorry attempt in creating a sonnet~

for the line, i think it should be the ones who call, so it is in rhyme with "or any song at all"

good job trying though o:
i wish i could write my own sonnet, but i ain't got no time fo dat

Thanks for the tip smile

no problem c: