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Haunting Paranoia

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 8:56 am

These endless goodbye's,
The never ending lies,
What can I be,
If you're not beside me,
For you are my voice,
My wisdom,
My pride,
If it's what I assume,
Then I like living a lie.
All of the ties,
Have long been severed.
Please just say the inevitable,
Let me cry all of the memories away.
What is laughter to crying if there is only room for Fighting?
The only way to heal,
Is to limp the road of recovery.
So please release me from your grasp,
For I am already in the shadows.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 10:39 am
This is good! I like how it tells a whole story. I have known people that live this story and it sucks. To be so in love with someone but all they do is hurt you and argue with you. I live with people that live this poem. It's very touching. I'm not sure how it would be to people who have never been in this situation or know someone who has, but I believe to those that have, it's very touching. 3nodding  

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