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 Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2012 1:45 pm
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I've been on somewhat of a break from drawing avi art, because I had been working on my anatomy skills. So, just finished at about 1:00 am (my minds most creative at night xD) I drew this. I know that the chin is jutting out too much, and that her right arm is too small, especially the hand/finger area. Also, the head seems too, 'long' i guess xD but is there any thing else you noticed? I was going to post this in PP but i already have something there, and there are amazing artists here! So, sorry about the long rant. Critiques/comments, etc?poke me. with your mouse.I also think the foot area looks messed up xD |
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2012 2:23 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 2:00 am
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turtle souffle I've been on somewhat of a break from drawing avi art, because I had been working on my anatomy skills. So, just finished at about 1:00 am (my minds most creative at night xD) I drew this. I know that the chin is jutting out too much, and that her right arm is too small, especially the hand/finger area. Also, the head seems too, 'long' i guess xD but is there any thing else you noticed? I was going to post this in PP but i already have something there, and there are amazing artists here! So, sorry about the long rant. Critiques/comments, etc?poke me. with your mouse.I also think the foot area looks messed up xD
It's pretty good. I do have a few things to comment on though (besides the ones you have already mentioned.)
To see what I am talking about, you can look here
The head is pretty flat. Rather than a straight line down from the forehead, the nose and chin should form a wide V. (indicated with blue)
And for the hands, I think you should indicate the fingers, rather than just having the claws there.
I like the detail on the top though. That is a lot of feathers to draw.
((Oops, I forgot to draw a claw emotion_awesome )) |
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 8:03 am
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AuroraCelestine turtle souffle I've been on somewhat of a break from drawing avi art, because I had been working on my anatomy skills. So, just finished at about 1:00 am (my minds most creative at night xD) I drew this. I know that the chin is jutting out too much, and that her right arm is too small, especially the hand/finger area. Also, the head seems too, 'long' i guess xD but is there any thing else you noticed? I was going to post this in PP but i already have something there, and there are amazing artists here! So, sorry about the long rant. Critiques/comments, etc?poke me. with your mouse.I also think the foot area looks messed up xD
To see what I am talking about, you can look here
The head is pretty flat. Rather than a straight line down from the forehead, the nose and chin should form a wide V. (indicated with blue)
And for the hands, I think you should indicate the fingers, rather than just having the claws there.
I like the detail on the top though. That is a lot of feathers to draw.
((Oops, I forgot to draw a claw emotion_awesome ))
Thanks! This is alot of help whee |
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 2:10 pm
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turtle souffle AuroraCelestine turtle souffle I've been on somewhat of a break from drawing avi art, because I had been working on my anatomy skills. So, just finished at about 1:00 am (my minds most creative at night xD) I drew this. I know that the chin is jutting out too much, and that her right arm is too small, especially the hand/finger area. Also, the head seems too, 'long' i guess xD but is there any thing else you noticed? I was going to post this in PP but i already have something there, and there are amazing artists here! So, sorry about the long rant. Critiques/comments, etc?poke me. with your mouse.I also think the foot area looks messed up xD
To see what I am talking about, you can look here
The head is pretty flat. Rather than a straight line down from the forehead, the nose and chin should form a wide V. (indicated with blue)
And for the hands, I think you should indicate the fingers, rather than just having the claws there.
I like the detail on the top though. That is a lot of feathers to draw.
((Oops, I forgot to draw a claw emotion_awesome ))Thanks! This is alot of help whee
You're welcome. |
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