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QmoniqueQ

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2012 6:53 pm
When i was alone i was incomeplete,when i was with someone i felt something inside but not love for that someone.
i dont knopw what it was but when we where over it dint hurt but still incomplete,when i met you i felt something new.
When u and me bacame a we i was complete.
When we were over i felt sad and hurt i was incomplete then when we got back together i knew this time will be forever...you got me completed heart



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PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2012 11:33 am
good but maybe work on checking it over just to make sure there are no spelling mistakes but good besides that xd  

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QmoniqueQ

PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2012 2:17 pm
i know i got some spelling errors,i am not good at spelling  
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