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 Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 4:59 pm
You helped me through it
You helped me when I broke
You helped me when I cried
You helped me when I died inside
You helped me feel..
You helped me heal...
But how can I heal when I know I love you
You didn't help me,by not saying three simple words...
I love you..
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 5:08 pm
Mm, this is fairly good. A basic poem but it's message is clear. Personally I like more imagery but this is still a good poem.
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 1:18 pm
I am
I am the broken
I amthe bruised
I am the poor ones...
I have been
Used..
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 2:14 pm
Draculoh I am
I am the broken
I am the bruised
I am the poor ones...
I have been
Used.. Isn't that by BarlowGirl? It's song lyrics to their song "Song for the Broken". Yup, it is. Great song!
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 2:16 pm
buckwolvhoosier Draculoh I am
I am the broken
I am the bruised
I am the poor ones...
I have been
Used.. Isn't that by BarlowGirl? It's song lyrics to their song "Song for the Broken". Yup, it is. Great song! Yeah i posted it because it's really good and I picked a part out that reminded me of a friend.
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 2:17 pm
Draculoh buckwolvhoosier Draculoh I am
I am the broken
I am the bruised
I am the poor ones...
I have been
Used.. Isn't that by BarlowGirl? It's song lyrics to their song "Song for the Broken". Yup, it is. Great song! Yeah i posted it because it's really good and I picked a part out that reminded me of a friend. I love BarlowGirl, so I recognized it right away ^^
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 2:19 pm
buckwolvhoosier Draculoh buckwolvhoosier Draculoh I am
I am the broken
I am the bruised
I am the poor ones...
I have been
Used.. Isn't that by BarlowGirl? It's song lyrics to their song "Song for the Broken". Yup, it is. Great song! Yeah i posted it because it's really good and I picked a part out that reminded me of a friend. I love BarlowGirl, so I recognized it right away ^^ Yea.... I saw this on a photo so it just reminded me of a friend.
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 2:29 pm
WaterStar156
You helped me through it
You helped me when I broke
You helped me when I cried
You helped me when I died inside
You helped me feel..
You helped me heal...
But how can I heal when I know I love you
You didn't help me,by not saying three simple words...
I love you..
read it, liked it. more imagery though. It is good though. good Job
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